r13033: Thankyou very much to Brad Henry for fixing up many aspects of the

release notes.  I will answer some questions and clarify some points
in the next commit.

Andrew Bartlett
(This used to be commit d01c4dd84895efdde6043b63dd377fe441366094)

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-What's new in Samba4 Technology Preview
-=======================================
+What's new in Samba 4 Technology Preview
+========================================
 
-Samba 4 is the ambitious next version of the Samba suite that is being 
-developed in parallel to the stable 3.0 series. The main emphasis in 
-this branch is support for the AD logon protocols used by Windows 2000
-and above.
+Samba 4 is the ambitious next version of the Samba suite that is being
+developed in parallel to the stable 3.0 series. The main emphasis in
+this branch is support for the Active Directory logon protocols used
+by Windows 2000 and above.
 
 Samba 4 is currently not yet in a state where it is usable in
 production environments. Note the WARNINGS below, and the STATUS file,
 which aims to document what should and should not work.
 
-With 3 years of development under our belt since tridge firs proposed
-a new VFS layer for Samba3 (a project which eventually lead to our AD
-efforts), it was felt that we should create something we could 'show
-off' to our users.  This is a Technology Preview (TP), aimed at allowing
-users, managers and developers to see how we have progressed, and to
-invite feedback and support.
+With 3 years of development under our belt since tridge first proposed
+a new Virtual File System (VFS) layer for Samba3 (a project which
+eventually lead to our Active Directory efforts), it was felt that we
+should create something we could 'show off' to our users.  This is a
+Technology Preview (TP), aimed at allowing users, managers and
+developers to see how we have progressed, and to invite feedback and
+support.
 
 WARNINGS
 ========
 
 Samba4 TP is currently a pre-alpha technology.  It may eat your cat, but
-is far more likely to choose to munch on your password database.  In
-particular if you are upgrading from Samba3, you should backup all
-configuration and data.
+is far more likely to choose to munch on your password database. We
+recommend against upgrading any production servers from Samba 3 to
+Samba 4 at this stage.  If you are upgrading an experimental server,
+you should backup all configuration and data.
 
 We expect that format changes will require that the user database be
 rebuilt from scratch a number of times before we make a final release,
-loosing password data. 
+losing password data each time.
 
-Samba4 TP includes basic ACL protection on the main user database, but
-due to time constraints, none on the registry at this stage.  We do
-not currently have ACLs on the SWAT web-based management tool.
+Samba 4 Technology Preview includes basic Access Control List (ACL)
+protection on the main user database, but due to time constraints,
+none on the registry at this stage.  We also do not currently have
+ACLs on the SWAT web-based management tool. This means that Samba 4
+Technology Preview is not secure.
 
-Filesystem access should occour as the logged in user, much as Samba3
+File system access should occur as the logged in user, much as Samba3
 does.
 
-We strongly recommend against use in a production environment at this
-stage.
+Again, we strongly recommend against use in a production environment
+at this stage.
 
 NEW FEATURES
 ============
 
-Samba4 supports the server-side of the AD logon environment
-used by Windows 2000 and later, as evidenced by domain join
-and domain logon operations.  
+Samba4 supports the server-side of the Active Directory logon environment
+used by Windows 2000 and later, so we can do full domain join
+and domain logon operations.
 
 Our Domain Controller (DC) implementation includes our own built-in
-LDAP server, KDC as well as the logon services provided over CIFS.  We
-correctly generate the Kerberos PAC, and include it with the kerberos
-tickets we issue.
-
-SWAT is the new user-freindly interface to Samba4 managment, and
-provides access to our setup and migration functionality.  In
-particular, we can migrate windows domains in Samba4 from this
-interface.  This allows setup of initial user databases, and upgrades
-from Samba3.
-
-The new NTFVS features in Samba4, the project that started this all,
-is concerned with providing 'exact' semantics for basic file
-operations, and is backed by an extensive client testsuite.
-
-A new scripting interface has been added to Samba4, allowing
-JavaScript programs to interface to Samba's internals.  This is also
-used for the SWAT GUI.  
-
-Samba4 is strongly based around an LDAP-like backend, which includes
-an implementation against the actual LDAP protocol.  With the addition
-of modules on directory servers and in Samba, we hope this can allow
-Samba4 to be a powerful frontend to vendor directories, much as Samba3
-is.
+LDAP server and Kerberos Domain Controller as well as the standard
+logon services provided over CIFS.  We correctly generate the Kerberos
+PAC, and include it with the Kerberos tickets we issue. [AB: What does
+this mean to the user?]
 
-CHANGES
-=======
+SWAT is now integrated into Samba 4 as the user-friendly interface to
+Samba server management. SWAT provides easy provides access to our
+setup and migration tools.  Using SWAT, you can migrate windows
+domains in Samba 4, allowing easy setup of initial user databases, and
+upgrades from Samba 3.
+
+The new VFS features in Samba 4 adapts the filesystem on the server to
+match the Windows client semantics, [what the is effect of this for
+the user?]. The VFS is backed with an extensive automated test suite.
+
+A new scripting interface has been added to Samba 4, allowing
+JavaScript programs to interface to Samba's internals.
 
-Those familiar with Samba 3 can find a list of user-visible changes 
-since that release series in the NEWS file. 
+The Samba 4 architecture is based around an LDAP-like database that
+can use a range of modular backends. One of the backends supports
+standards compliant LDAP servers (including OpenLDAP). This will allow
+Samba 4 to be powerful frontend to large directories.
 
-In particular, standalone server and domain member roles are not
-currently supported.  While we have much of the infrustructure
-required, we have not collected these peices togeather.
+CHANGES
+=======
 
-There is no printing support in the current release.
+Those familiar with Samba 3 can find a list of user-visible changes
+since that release series in the NEWS file.
 
 KNOWN ISSUES
 ============
 
+- Standalone server and domain member roles are not currently
+  supported.  While we have much of the infrastructure required, we
+  have not collected these pieces together. 
+
+- There is no printing support in the current release.
+
 - SWAT can be painful with <TAB> and forms.  Just use the mouse, as
-  the JS layer doing this will change.
+  the JavaScript layer doing this will change.
 
 - Domain logons (using Kerberos) from windows clients incorrectly
   state that the password expires today.
@@ -101,12 +104,12 @@ in root of the tarball.
 DEVELOPMENT and FEEDBACK
 ========================
 Bugs can be filed at https://bugzilla.samba.org/. Please
-look at the STATUS file before filing a bug to see if a particular 
+look at the STATUS file before filing a bug to see if a particular
 is supposed to work yet.
 
-Development and general discussion about Samba 4 happens mainly on 
-the #samba-technical IRC channel (on irc.freenode.net) and 
-the samba-technical mailing list (see http://lists.samba.org/ for 
+Development and general discussion about Samba 4 happens mainly on
+the #samba-technical IRC channel (on irc.freenode.net) and
+the samba-technical mailing list (see http://lists.samba.org/ for
 details).