PHPTR Edit 2. More to come.

(This used to be commit bc4d2f60cefa126415b06440280761d19e8c0d21)

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diff --git a/docs/Samba3-HOWTO/TOSHARG-LargeFile.xml b/docs/Samba3-HOWTO/TOSHARG-LargeFile.xml
index 44f054236e..d227638cbd 100644
--- a/docs/Samba3-HOWTO/TOSHARG-LargeFile.xml
+++ b/docs/Samba3-HOWTO/TOSHARG-LargeFile.xml
@@ -9,25 +9,25 @@
 <title>Handling Large Directories</title>
 
 <para>
-Samba-3.0.12 implements a solution for sites that have experienced performance degradation do to the
+Samba-3.0.12 implements a solution for sites that have experienced performance degradation due to the
 problem of using Samba-3 with applications that need large numbers of files (100,000 or more) per directory.
 </para>
 
 <para>
 The key was fixing the directory handling to read only the current list requested instead of the old
-(up to samba-3.0.11) behaviour of reading the entire directory into memory before doling out names.
-Normally this would have broken OS/2 applications which have very strange delete semantics, but by
-stealing logic from Samba4 (thanks tridge) the current code in 3.0.12 handles this correctly.
+(up to samba-3.0.11) behavior of reading the entire directory into memory before doling out names.
+Normally this would have broken OS/2 applications, which have very strange delete semantics, but by
+stealing logic from Samba4 (thanks, Tridge), the current code in 3.0.12 handles this correctly.
 </para>
 
 <para>
-To set up an application that needs large number of files per directory in a way that does not
-damage performance unduly follow these steps:
+To set up an application that needs large numbers of files per directory in a way that does not
+damage performance unduly, follow these steps:
 </para>
 
 <para>
-Firstly, you need to canonicalize all the files in the directory to have one case, upper or lower - take your
-pick (I chose upper as all my files were already upper case names). Then set up a new custom share for the
+First, you need to canonicalize all the files in the directory to have one case, upper or lower &smbmdash; take your
+pick (I chose upper because all my files were already uppercase names). Then set up a new custom share for the
 application as follows:
 <screen>
 [bigshare]
@@ -42,29 +42,29 @@ application as follows:
 
 <para>
 Of course, use your own path and settings, but set the case options to match the case of all the files in your
-directory. The path should point at the large directory needed for the application - any new files created in
-there and in any paths under it will be forced by smbd into upper case - but smbd will no longer have to scan
-the directory for names - it knows that if a file does not exist in upper case then it doesn't exist at all.
+directory. The path should point at the large directory needed for the application &smbmdash; any new files created in
+there and in any paths under it will be forced by smbd into uppercase, but smbd will no longer have to scan
+the directory for names: it knows that if a file does not exist in uppercase, then it doesn't exist at all.
 </para>
 
 <para>
 The secret to this is really in the <smbconfoption name="case sensitive">True</smbconfoption>
 line. This tells smbd never to scan for case-insensitive versions of names. So if an application asks for a file
-called <filename>FOO</filename>, and it can not be found by a simple stat call, then smbd will return file not
+called <filename>FOO</filename>, and it cannot be found by a simple stat call, then smbd will return file not
 found immediately without scanning the containing directory for a version of a different case. The other
 <filename>xxx case xxx</filename> lines make this work by forcing a consistent case on all files created by smbd.
 </para>
 
 <para>
-Remember, all files and directories under the <parameter>path</parameter> directory must be in upper case
-with this &smb.conf; stanza as smbd will not be able to find lower case filenames with these settings. Also
-note this is done on a per-share basis, allowing this to be set only for a share servicing an application with
-this problematic behaviour (using large numbers of entries in a directory) - the rest of your smbd shares
+Remember, all files and directories under the <parameter>path</parameter> directory must be in uppercase
+with this &smb.conf; stanza because smbd will not be able to find lowercase filenames with these settings. Also
+note that this is done on a per-share basis, allowing this parameter to be set only for a share servicing an application with
+this problematic behavior (using large numbers of entries in a directory) &smbmdash; the rest of your smbd shares
 don't need to be affected.
 </para>
 
 <para>
-This makes smbd much faster when dealing with large directories.  My test case has over 100,000 files and
+This makes smbd much faster when dealing with large directories.  My test case has over 100,000 files, and
 smbd now deals with this very efficiently.
 </para>